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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Sean Bosco" data-source="post: 10807" data-attributes="member: 4212">Don't take this the wrong way, but are you a non-native english speaker? If so it shows in the copy and that could impact your results. You might want to try putting this into Bard or Chat GPT and asking them to point out grammar and spelling mistakes. A tool like grammarly would be good too. In general it's waaaay to long and the 1 sentence per line structure makes it appear as a huge wall of text that my eyes just want to glaze over. Try 1-3 sentence paragraphs and shorten the copy overall a good deal while still trying to retain the hook, story, offer setup.</blockquote>