Dorris
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Hi, i've been sending emails for a week or two with one of my customer lists, i'm using convertkit and writing emails with Bing Copilot to make my life easier taking inspiration from other businesses that sell the same things that i do and those emails look very similar to those but my emails get over 55% average open rate and only 1.2% CTR. i've been trying to figure out what i could be doing wrong but i cant find a reason why my CTR is this low, here's an example of one of my emails:
Hey {{ subscriber.first_name }}
I’m thrilled to share an exclusive sneak peek of our latest *** with you.
Dive into your *** demo here and get a feel for the full version.
As a token of appreciation for being part of our community, I’m giving you a 25% discount on the full version. This discount is already applied at checkout!
Seize this opportunity and get the full version of *** here. Unleash your creativity with the complete set of loops.
Don’t forget, this special offer is time-sensitive. Act now!
And after this i usually put a countdown timer.
Hey {{ subscriber.first_name }}
I’m thrilled to share an exclusive sneak peek of our latest *** with you.
Dive into your *** demo here and get a feel for the full version.
As a token of appreciation for being part of our community, I’m giving you a 25% discount on the full version. This discount is already applied at checkout!
Seize this opportunity and get the full version of *** here. Unleash your creativity with the complete set of loops.
Don’t forget, this special offer is time-sensitive. Act now!
And after this i usually put a countdown timer.